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0_O Now that was totally unexpected! WHAT is going on!?
I`m loving this story more and more and the warm colours on this page look awesome!
Also, yellow speech bubble! It`s probably king Erzats…
“If he’s hurt you…”
“You’ll do what?”
Just reading that gave me chills.
And if he *has* hurt Cyrene, Victuals won’t have to do the killing. I’ll do it myself, I’m so mad!
Yep. Chills here as well. Loving everything about this page. Many would have just had the view in the 2nd panel, but the view from behind Victuals to give the perspective of how close they are and the vision of him looking out over her is just beautiful.
I like how Cyrene has some red around her nose, just like her father, Erats, did.
Now hurry up and get that book in Amazon or start pre-orders so I can throw my money at you.
P.S. are you really going to upload all the remaining pages on Monday or continue to stagger them?
Yeah, there are only 4 more pages (2 spreads) for book 1. And yes, it’s a total cliffhanger. It’s the only way I could figure out how to break up the story. It basically ends in the middle of Act 2 when everything changes… I’ve said too much already.
I’m working like crazy to get Book 2 (the final book) thumbnailed and ready to start drawing and coloring. It’s going to be a little wait between the two though because I will need to focus on marketing and selling these but hopefully soon I’ll be able to start up my regular posting schedule again.
I have my suspicions to how the one asking in the last panel would look like. But whether I am right or wrong, I suspect it’s better to keep my mouth shut
Talk about a dramatic ending!
I’m in love with the yellows and how the speaker’s shadow falls on victuals hand in the last panel…
You don’t mess with a guy’s girlfriend. That’s rule #1. Smack is going to hit the fan now for sure.
Have just read the archives to catch up…very impressed with this storyline and artwork! I love the treatment of color and point of view angles! looking forward to following more!
Very nice indeed… (Eagle showed me this).
This is amazing. I’m sold. I’ll buy the book when it comes out you a awesome story teller:)
I love this graphic novel, and if I can afford it, I’ll buy both volumes. BTW, did you know that Erzats is very similar to the German Ersatz meaning alternate/alternative?
I’m going out on a limb here, but I guess this is the King, in Victuals old hulking body.
I bet you, he’s in his body.
Ouh, just spent 3 hours going through the comic from start to finish. PLEASE TELL ME YOU’LL BE COMPLETING IT?!?!
Your drawing style, coloring, and lighting are an inspiration. Thanks for being awesome! I especially LOVE the lighting throughout the comics. Really cool use of luminosity. And the first spread, how the lens focus blurs. Sweet :)
Thank you! I WILL DEFINITELY be finishing this story. It might take me a few more years (gulp) but it will get finished. I’m too far along to quit now. hah
Thanks again for the compliments.
Oh, man… I’m starting to get withdrawal symptoms already… compound that with ‘cliff-hanger cut off’, and the results will be monstrously painful-
I WILL CHECK THIS SITE EVERY DAY- THE MASTER COMMANDS IT
Oh man, awesome. I’m way too excited about what’s going to happen down here….
One thing though, I noticed that the yellow speech bubble reads “You’ll do what!?” and not “You’ll do what?”. Just wondering if that was intentional, as the exclamation mark – question mark combo is usually reserved for exclamations of surprise in response to a positive statement, rather than as a stand-alone question.
It comes off a bit strong, is what I’m saying, rather than calm and creepy which would seem to match the scene better. Is it on purpose? Will all be revealed?
Just thought I’d ask!
Actually, that last sentence (word balloon) was added right before I put this page online. It wasn’t in the original version but I felt like the shadow alone on Victuals arm didn’t clearly explain what someone was approaching.
So to answer your question. I wasn’t sure what I was doing and it never went through my editor. So you are probably right and I should probably just use a question mark instead of both. I envisioned it more creepy than surprised.
Thanks for chiming in and pointing that out!?
I must say this is an awesome show…but here how part of this would be in a parody.
“If he’s hurt you…”
“You’ll do what?”
“I’ll fire mah laser.”
He does so.
But this isn’t a parody so it’s a moot point.
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