Jul 12
Check out my Kickstarter.com campaign to raise funds to pay for the printing of reMIND. There are lots of incentives in pledging including getting your name printed in the book itself. If you are thinking about buying a copy of reMIND once it’s printed than I encourage you to just make a $20 pledge now and you will get the book in the mail as soon as it’s hot off the press. If you wait until the book is out, you’ll end up spending more because it will have a cover price of $25 to $30 not including shipping. So save yourself some money and help me out at the same time. Thanks for all of your pledges so far! This thing is gonna rock!
Spread the Love:
Hi. I love the comic so far, but i have just one minor complaint about this page…. Sonja says that with minor adjustments the suit can be made to fit Victuals’ body… That suit is 4 times his size, at least. It’s not a matter of a minor adjustment… it’s about building the whole thing again. Sure, bits and pieces could be used, but a new suit would have to be built for Victuals.
I see your point. Maybe I should have her say that she has ideas of how to make the suit work for Victuals.
I think that with her kind of talent as an inventor, I believe to her they might seem minor adjustments.
You could have her say the suit fits victuals, and have his movements move the larger limbs of the suit, kinda like they do with those walkers in avatar.
Maybe the adjustments are in the interior? sort of like a mech. I really like it jason though. You are really refining this. Fantastic man… fantastic
“Minor” adjustments :D
I agree with Cristi there is a lot more than minor adjustment to be made before it can fit Victuals, as you said it would work better with ideas. Still loving the graphic novel though, I love your drawing and colouring style
Grammar and English nits:
“It was his life” is not idiomatic in English. Perhaps “It was his life’s ambition” or “It was his heart’s desire.”
I’m pretty sure there should be a comma in “tested, really”.
Should stick with conditional in “you could go back”.
Direct address commas in “told you, Sonja” and “Excuse me, Mr. Nahusthan”
And a comma before “please”.
Of course, you guys probably don’t know what adjustments she has in mind. Maybe she DOES know a way to let Victuals use the suit, while leaving it mostly intact.
stick with “minor.” Why? I once had a mechanical genius tell me he was making some minor adjustments to his car. You know a new engine, a new transmission, and rebuilding the chassis.
This is the same way for me switching my PC from XP to Win 7 was a minor upgrade, and pulling out a TV tuner card and replacing it with another was 15 min of work.
I’d agree. Sonja is an inventor who has thrown together at least three belief-straining McGuffins in her basement workshop. Compared to that, reworking the suit is going to be busy work.
“Minor” adjustments to Victuals :) not the suit.
I like the perspective in the last panel on page 70. It’s nice and it mixes it up a little bit