Really outstanding work mate! I'm almost finished my script and can't wait to start working on the art. This is truly inspirational stuff! Well done! The only thing that caught my eye was the sentence "We were engaged upon the kings orders." It could possibly be misread as: being occupied at that time with the king's orders, as apposed to a marriage agreement BY order: We BECAME engaged BY order of the king.
Really pedantic I know, but just a thought.
I think it's amazing and can't wait to read the rest! Thank you!
Thanks for the comment D! I'm glad for your critique as well. The replacement sentence you suggest is much better sounding. I'll definitely change it up. It seems like I spend just as long trying to write a coherent sentence as I do with the art and I still can't get them to sound quite right. This kind of stuff is so great for me to hear.
deep- well written and worth the time. Jason your story is fantastic. I loved the artwork as well it reminds me of a european comic which in my opinion is a high honor. I am looking forward to seeing what happens-
Same here.. :D Btw, I'm so surprised that you include painting art in your graphic novels.. I'm starting to think that your graphic novels is actually painting novels because each page of it contains serious artworks. Well done!
For the whole "body snatcher" theory, I would think that the king would likely incapacitate his own body, then perform the switch. A reasonable side effect would be that our narrator would be able to switch bodies as well, though he probably was only able to do it by sheer luck and desperation. The cat was just a convenient vessel, and his desperation allowed him to switch bodies to the cat, as he would not know how to do it at will.
I love this series. :) It just gets more and more surreal while still making a weird sort of sense.
its killing me to know what happened to him that made him a cat
And not only a cat, but her cat!
Just clicked the vote ^^ I'm happy you opted not to include the lizard kiss.
Thanks and thanks!
Maybe he has always been a cat. He just had this odd idea that he was once a lizardman! Or not. :)
If that's the case, maybe the title for the comic might want to change to that of 'Lost' and not 'Remind' :)
Really outstanding work mate! I'm almost finished my script and can't wait to start working on the art. This is truly inspirational stuff! Well done! The only thing that caught my eye was the sentence "We were engaged upon the kings orders." It could possibly be misread as: being occupied at that time with the king's orders, as apposed to a marriage agreement BY order: We BECAME engaged BY order of the king.
Really pedantic I know, but just a thought.
I think it's amazing and can't wait to read the rest! Thank you!
Thanks for the comment D! I'm glad for your critique as well. The replacement sentence you suggest is much better sounding. I'll definitely change it up. It seems like I spend just as long trying to write a coherent sentence as I do with the art and I still can't get them to sound quite right. This kind of stuff is so great for me to hear.
deep- well written and worth the time. Jason your story is fantastic. I loved the artwork as well it reminds me of a european comic which in my opinion is a high honor. I am looking forward to seeing what happens-
trav
Just stumbled onto your great book. Really sweet stuff!
I'm an instant fan!
Same here.. :D Btw, I'm so surprised that you include painting art in your graphic novels.. I'm starting to think that your graphic novels is actually painting novels because each page of it contains serious artworks. Well done!
Thanks you guys! Your encouragement is much appreciated!
This is continuing from a post on the last comic.
For the whole "body snatcher" theory, I would think that the king would likely incapacitate his own body, then perform the switch. A reasonable side effect would be that our narrator would be able to switch bodies as well, though he probably was only able to do it by sheer luck and desperation. The cat was just a convenient vessel, and his desperation allowed him to switch bodies to the cat, as he would not know how to do it at will.
I would love to here anyone else's theories!
More standard is "… I was awakened …."
Oops, that should be Toothgnip. As in Toothgnip. I guess the resemblance isn't as great as it seemed at first.
No problem I was just going to say the link was broken so I removed it.
I LOVE the background.