Loving your artwork, the use of colour and sense of edginess reminds me of the old school Aliens comics I used to love so much. Keep up the fantastic work!
The only worry I have with the direction of the story is the mystery has been removed. Well, I do still want to know who the lizard man is now, and how many lizard people are still alive, but the main mystery that was in chapter one is solved.
I'm sure you will bring up a new mystery, a new thing for me to want to really know.
Wow, this is really cool! I'm yet another traveling over from Phoenix Requiem. I really love your art style! I've read to the end of what you have up already and I can't wait for more.
Just wanted to say that you need to add a comma after skill in the second to last word bubble. ^.^
Forgive me, but shouldn't the third textbox read, "The king, impressed by my strength and skill, requested my assistance as his personal bodyguard from that day forth." Or something along those lines?
That's exactly what I was looking for. When I posted this page I asked if anyone could help me come up with a better way to say that narration box but nobody had any suggestions… until now! I think you cracked it for me. Thanks! I'll put it in the update queue.
I dig the snot and shaky hands in the second panel. Shows the intensity of emotion and after-effects of the adrenaline charged experience, even on a lizard man whose eyes we can't see. Great attention to 'acting' detail!
Awesome! I really like where this is going man. Super stuff. At first I thought in the last panel, he was handing the king the claw! haha
Loving your artwork, the use of colour and sense of edginess reminds me of the old school Aliens comics I used to love so much. Keep up the fantastic work!
Nice. I vote for you comic all the time.
The only worry I have with the direction of the story is the mystery has been removed. Well, I do still want to know who the lizard man is now, and how many lizard people are still alive, but the main mystery that was in chapter one is solved.
I'm sure you will bring up a new mystery, a new thing for me to want to really know.
Wow, this is really cool! I'm yet another traveling over from Phoenix Requiem. I really love your art style! I've read to the end of what you have up already and I can't wait for more.
Just wanted to say that you need to add a comma after skill in the second to last word bubble. ^.^
Forgive me, but shouldn't the third textbox read, "The king, impressed by my strength and skill, requested my assistance as his personal bodyguard from that day forth." Or something along those lines?
Other than that, I really love this comic!
That's exactly what I was looking for. When I posted this page I asked if anyone could help me come up with a better way to say that narration box but nobody had any suggestions… until now! I think you cracked it for me. Thanks! I'll put it in the update queue.
There's a direct address comma missing in "…rewarded, my boy."
I dig the snot and shaky hands in the second panel. Shows the intensity of emotion and after-effects of the adrenaline charged experience, even on a lizard man whose eyes we can't see. Great attention to 'acting' detail!
Just coincidence that the king was nearby? I think not.