I appreciate you taking the time to stop by! I'm always excited to hear that the blog as been useful to people. Please comment as much as you can handle. I love it!
I should mention how much I like that you make the different characters' speech bubbles (or blocks) different colors. It's subtle, yet makes the dialogue very easy to keep track of.
Since you invited us to keep an eye out for spelling/grammar tweaks, I figure I'll be obnoxious/useful and point out a very small change: on page 44, "it's" should be "its".
Nitpicking aside: I'm really enjoying the story and artwork so far! Thanks for making this available!
Hey, seconding Speth's comment… "it's" should actually be "its".
A quick trick I always use is that I'll read everything I have with contractions (can't, don't, it's, he's, etc) as though they were the separate words themselves. If it doesn't make sense, it is not correct. Took me awhile but… Well, just keep up the good work. <3
Once again, I commend you on your BEAUTIFUL art. Keep up the wonderful work!
That giant enemy crab looks suspiciously (lizard)man-made. Note the thingy stuck to its front and the bands around the base of its eyestalks. I'm thinking "experiment turned loose for test (or escaped).
………… lol, he was a lizard man 8D
He sure lost a lot of buffness in his transformation to a cat.
But seriously, the art of this comic is so beautiful and so very fitting to its story.
I'm excited to see you're so professional (your advice in your blogs has been very insightful for me) and to see where this goes from here.
This is my first time commenting, but I should have before. I hope to comment again. :)
I appreciate you taking the time to stop by! I'm always excited to hear that the blog as been useful to people. Please comment as much as you can handle. I love it!
That wouldn't be a Sony E6 2006-style Giant Enemy Crab would it? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Giant_Enemy_Crab
It is now!
That was totally my first thought when I saw the phrase "giant crab."
sweet comic i read it all so far and i like it more please :D
Wow, cool. Keep it up!
I'm really enjoying your story! You're artwork is awesome! Has an almost ethereal quality. Reminds me of Sam Keith (The Maxx) in a way! Very cool!
Thanks man! It's funny you should say Sam Keith. Read the last part of this post: http://www.remindblog.com/2010/03/15/chapter-1-up…
Thanks everyone for your support and comments!
I should mention how much I like that you make the different characters' speech bubbles (or blocks) different colors. It's subtle, yet makes the dialogue very easy to keep track of.
Since you invited us to keep an eye out for spelling/grammar tweaks, I figure I'll be obnoxious/useful and point out a very small change: on page 44, "it's" should be "its".
Nitpicking aside: I'm really enjoying the story and artwork so far! Thanks for making this available!
Thank for point "it's" out. I'll upload a change today.
Hey, seconding Speth's comment… "it's" should actually be "its".
A quick trick I always use is that I'll read everything I have with contractions (can't, don't, it's, he's, etc) as though they were the separate words themselves. If it doesn't make sense, it is not correct. Took me awhile but… Well, just keep up the good work. <3
Once again, I commend you on your BEAUTIFUL art. Keep up the wonderful work!
I think the clauses need a comma to separate them in "…in its claws, about to snap her in two"
I don't understand how Vittles conveyed to Sonja that he was a lizard man.
Looks like the giant enemy crab has got his weak point armored this time around. XD
Amazing job as always, thanks so much for providing us such an enthralling story. :D
That giant enemy crab looks suspiciously (lizard)man-made. Note the thingy stuck to its front and the bands around the base of its eyestalks. I'm thinking "experiment turned loose for test (or escaped).
GIANT ENEMY CRAB: ATTACK ITS WEAKPOINTS FOOR MASSIVE DAMAGE!!!