ANYWAY, If not for comments like yours, pointing out suggestions, then I'd keep chugging along never thinking about things like speed lines. It's funny that you brought it up because it's something I never though about before. I don't even know why I put them in there. I really appreciate the advice and I will definitely be aware of it from now on. I can see how the scene you mentioned could look better without them. If anything I'll soften them a bunch. Thanks again!

I'm super glad it turned out this way though because now I'm starting to get enough feedback to motivate me to get more pages done. I might have to take a short break after the first book (130 pages) is online because I have so little started on the second one. That will be a good year from now so things might change by the time I need to post those pages.

Yeah, life really does get in the way when it's a total hobby.

I can see how word of mouth is about as powerful of a tool as any. It's pretty hard to get people that excited though, but I see how consistent updates can play a big part in it. Thanks again for everything!

May I make a suggestion though: avoid movement lines, they're most often not necessary. For example the last panel in spread 16 would work better without the lines, in my opinion.

I've seen various release methods. Some artists just go with the flow and start drawing and posting every week, and if they fall behind, they fall behind. Others prefer to build a buffer (generally a month worth of updates) and release in that manner. I'm of the second opinion. My story is pretty slow paced at the beginning, in order to develop character and the scene. I figured that once I've completed roughly 10-15 pages, I'll commit to posting online. (I'm about 9 pages in now, so it will definitely be soon.

Seeing as my life schedule can often be erratic, I definitely want my posting schedule to be consistent. So having that buffer will help on those weeks where I'm falling behind. I also have a blog I'm trying to ramp up posting with to 3 times a week. So a webcomic placed in that posting schedule starts to cramp my time. There's no way I'd be able to rattle off a page every week from nothing, so I need that extra time to stay ahead of the game.

I appreciate your concern though. Partly I am doing this just to ensure that I get it done without any more long delays. I hate seeing another year go by with out much getting done.

I'm glad you enjoyed the review, Jason. To be honest, I'd have been tempted to wait a little longer to see where the story is going (as I tend to put a large emphasis on story in my reviews and I've not quite figured where you are going with reMIND at this juncture) but the reviews tend to be part inspiration… and reMIND caught the Muse's attention.

Take care. :) I love the fact the cat and rat seem quite affectionate of each other. ^^

Rob H.

I’m starting to get through all my back log of pages now so I starting to sweat a bit. The second chapter has quite a few pages that still need some desperate attention. Luckily I have a small army now who expect me to deliver and there’s nothing better then other people in the deadline equation.

It’s always fun to hear what things catch peoples attention in my pages. The water heater next to the washer and dryer is an interesting thing to point out. I greatly appreciate your comments. Your new font is rocking, by the way!