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reMIND – Spread 11
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reMIND – Spread 11

by Jason Brubaker on January 25, 2010 at 6:00 am
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- the making of a graphic novel

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  1. Juan Carlos
    Juan Carlos
    January 28, 2010 at 11:15 am | # | Reply

    Hi

    Im from Dominican Republic, the illustration in your comic book is impressive, i can´t wait to see more, keep it on

  2. Jason Brubaker
    Jason Brubaker
    January 29, 2010 at 4:00 am | # | Reply

    Thank you Juan! I will definitely be keeping on it. I just hope I can keep up with the crazy schedule I gave myself.

    It's also very exciting to see people from around the world looking at this. Thanks for the comment!

  3. CoverBoy
    CoverBoy
    February 5, 2010 at 10:09 pm | # | Reply

    Hi

    I'm from Bulgaria.

    This is some impressive work. I really like the story and the characters and coloring looks great. Keep up the good work, cant wait to see how the story goes.

    • Jason Brubaker
      Jason Brubaker
      February 6, 2010 at 6:53 am | # | Reply

      Thank you so much for stopping by and taking the time to comment! It's really cool to hear comments from people around the world. Did you take all those pictures on your blog? They are really nice!

      • CoverBoy
        CoverBoy
        February 6, 2010 at 9:37 pm | # | Reply

        Yes, I made all of them myself. Even if i don't own a professional camera I try to make the best of them. Thanks for commenting on them :) that means a lot.

  4. Snowbody
    Snowbody
    March 15, 2010 at 11:47 pm | # | Reply

    Also on the next page, "townspeople" should be one word, and I'd prefer a comma separate "Here, Victuals"

    • girish
      girish
      March 23, 2010 at 8:07 pm | # | Reply

      awesome, how do you get such nice line quality… is it all in PS or do you ink everything… and then work in PS… in addition to what snowbody mentioned, the word 'dilemma', but really, this is awesome, and inspiring…

      • Jason Brubaker
        Jason Brubaker
        March 24, 2010 at 1:13 am | # | Reply

        Hey thanks guys for the corrections! I really mean it. I sometimes focus so much on the art that I don't run any of the words through spell checker or past my wife before posting. Plus I'm just a bad spellerer. I'll make a note to fix these things you both mentioned in the next pass.

        As far as the linework goes, I have a post dedicated to that here http://www.remindblog.com/2010/02/18/inking-graphic-novel/” rel=”nofollow”>:http://www.remindblog.com/2010/02/18/inking-graphic-novel/

        Then after that I work all in PS with color textures that I also scanned. I'll try to do a post on it later to explain the process more.

        Thanks for the comment!

  5. Snowbody
    Snowbody
    March 16, 2010 at 6:45 am | # | Reply

    Isn’t the proper spelling “occurrences”?

    • Jason Brubaker
      Jason Brubaker
      June 19, 2010 at 6:00 am | # | Reply

      Updated it now. Uploading it later today! Thanks again and sorry it took me so long to fix.

  6. Shadd
    Shadd
    May 28, 2010 at 7:17 am | # | Reply

    Your art is absolutely fantastic. I'm looking forward to continuing the read this story. I even think I'd like to purchase it once it's published!

    Keep up the great work!

  7. Steph
    Steph
    June 3, 2010 at 7:20 am | # | Reply

    Love the progression of Sonja stepping out of the shadow!

  8. Luinathiel
    Luinathiel
    June 10, 2010 at 4:22 pm | # | Reply

    I've just started to read your comic and I really like it! It is visible that you work a lot with the composition of each spread, the structure is so upliftingly intricate ^^ Hooked on the story I am as well, what is up with the cat O.o I'll have to find out! ;)

  9. Dan Hoey
    Dan Hoey
    June 22, 2010 at 2:00 am | # | Reply

    Aha! Here's the typo that I remembered from my lost comments. The semicolon (;) after dilemma should be a colon (:). But you probably already fixed "dilemma" and "occurrences".

    • Jason Brubaker
      Jason Brubaker
      June 22, 2010 at 2:45 am | # | Reply

      I'm glad you pointed to dilemma and occurrences because I fixed those words but it looks like it never updated correctly. I'll have to look into why it's not updating. I'll fix the semicolon too while I'm at it. Thanks.

  10. Mr. Pantaloons
    Mr. Pantaloons
    January 18, 2011 at 1:27 pm | # | Reply

    “And he’s intelligent” is oddly direct, feels unnatural; you could play it for a joke maybe — “And he’s a chef?”

    • OhHaiMe
      OhHaiMe
      January 28, 2011 at 12:31 pm | # | Reply

      I was thinking the same thing,but I would say “And he can Cook?!”

  11. butterflied412
    butterflied412
    February 8, 2011 at 5:30 pm | # | Reply

    I don’t think that’s “her” Victuals anymore…or if it is (which I hope;) he’s forgot who he used to be and his previous life.

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