I don't know if it's just me but the cool to warm transition on the shadow on Victuals's tail looks a bit too abrupt, almost like a straight line. I think it would look better if the transition were smoother like it is on his front paw, the one that's clinging close to her shoulder.
it actually looks like you didn’t have enough of the overlay image that you use for texture to go all the way to the end of the tail. It’s minor, but it sticks out like a sore thumb. Otherwise, this is awesome. Love your style!!!
I want to apologize to a commenter who's comment got erased my mistake on my end. My computer froze up while I was replying in WordPress and it just went poof!
Another editing note: “your heads all swollen” — there should be an apostrophe in “head’s,” as in “your head is.”
You do gorgeous fur drawing, by the way. :)
Thanks! I'll upload the change today!
I don't know if it's just me but the cool to warm transition on the shadow on Victuals's tail looks a bit too abrupt, almost like a straight line. I think it would look better if the transition were smoother like it is on his front paw, the one that's clinging close to her shoulder.
Y/N?
I agree, though it's a minor issue… I only noticed it when I read your comment.
it actually looks like you didn’t have enough of the overlay image that you use for texture to go all the way to the end of the tail. It’s minor, but it sticks out like a sore thumb. Otherwise, this is awesome. Love your style!!!
I want to apologize to a commenter who's comment got erased my mistake on my end. My computer froze up while I was replying in WordPress and it just went poof!
I note that you included the direct address comma in "…beyond me, Victuals."
Something tells my Victuals was chasing more than just rats…or super rats if anything;)
I’ts kind of mean of her to take away the thing that he just risked his life trying to get, it’s stupid too, since it only encourages him to try again