Comments on: reMIND – Spread 6

By: Jason

Jason — Sat, 18 Jun 2011 02:50:51 +0000

Okay, as I read a bit further in. I start to wish I hadn’t been so quick to be cynical. The author may have very purposefully used the words he used. I need to have more faith!

By: Jason

Jason — Sat, 18 Jun 2011 02:16:40 +0000

I agree that the narrator doesn’t have to be omniscient, but if they’re telling the story from the present they wouldn’t say, “and I never saw it again.” You don’t lose your car keys and immediately say “and I never saw them again.” If the narrator is telling the story after the facts then the statement is a contradiction. It kind of bugs me too.

By: siehjin

siehjin — Wed, 18 May 2011 06:48:42 +0000

i don’t see why the narrator HAS to be omniscient. i’m fine with a narrator who doesn’t know that’s going to happen before it happens. i think that the artist has the freedom to decide what kind of narration he wants to use to tell his story.

By: Drachefly

Drachefly — Tue, 10 May 2011 12:16:04 +0000

Agreed. The statement when Victuals goes missing seems to be from the narrator, and if the narrator is not fully informed – knowing the end of the story – there had better be a very good reason and a major narrative break. This has not occurred. Unless this is NOT Victuals – zombie, mind-controlled, robot, whatnot – that first wording has to change.

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Circuit Reader 3: reMIND « The Blog at Airborne Cactus — Wed, 02 Mar 2011 01:06:10 +0000

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By: rico567

rico567 — Fri, 28 Jan 2011 11:54:17 +0000

Oh, yeah, and I think the artwork’s great, too.

By: rico567

rico567 — Fri, 28 Jan 2011 11:53:43 +0000

You can’t say she “never saw the cat again” in the earlier spread, then have kitty show up in this one. Maybe “She never thought-”

By: Jason Brubaker

Jason Brubaker — Thu, 20 Jan 2011 20:21:25 +0000

Thanks!!!

By: Tash

Tash — Thu, 20 Jan 2011 19:52:31 +0000

I LOVE the colours in your artwork! :)

By: Seshiro

Seshiro — Sat, 04 Dec 2010 08:49:43 +0000

FIRST COMMENT hey look THERE is where the cat went