Comments on: reMIND – Spread 5

By: Danny

Danny — Mon, 02 Jan 2012 03:54:54 +0000

I think it should be “If it weren’t for” instead of wasn’t; it’s subjunctive.

By: David A. Nova

David A. Nova — Wed, 01 Dec 2010 06:55:46 +0000

Another nice page layout. The transition of shots are particularly nice because of how the character's pose helps to establish the mood. Very nice story telling here, it's rare to see effective use of a three pannel layout, especially in American comics where all the pages are so filled with information.

By: Emma

Emma — Sun, 24 Oct 2010 13:59:36 +0000

I think the phrase is "pretty penny," but that's usually for something costing you a "pretty penny."

Anyway, those two highly important words aside, I love the drawings and am excited to keep reading

By: hunchbook

hunchbook — Tue, 03 Aug 2010 18:37:45 +0000

Why does the gravestone say 1904-20–? Was her father a hundred when he died? Wouldn't that make him 80 when she was born?

By: Dan Hoey

Dan Hoey — Tue, 22 Jun 2010 02:39:22 +0000

If she's asking her Dad, "Why, Dad?" then there should be a direct address comma there. But if she's asking herself why her father is one of the ones that disappeared, then "Why Dad?" is correct.

By: Dan Hoey

Dan Hoey — Mon, 21 Jun 2010 21:09:23 +0000

Gravestone is one word.

By: Jason Brubaker

Jason Brubaker — Sat, 19 Jun 2010 12:38:19 +0000

Thanks I just made the change and will be uploading it today!

By: Me

Me — Tue, 08 Jun 2010 12:10:48 +0000

Your drawings are lovely!

Also, there ought to be a comma in "Why, Dad?"

By: Steph

Steph — Thu, 03 Jun 2010 14:14:11 +0000

Quick editing note — “paying me a heafty penny” — “hefty” is misspelled. I only point it out because you asked me to. :)

By: What

What — Thu, 03 Jun 2010 11:47:21 +0000

Yarp, should be "hefty," though I find the wording a little clunky. Is she supposed to be mixing metaphors?