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reMIND – Spread 5

by Jason Brubaker on November 30, 2009 at 6:00 am
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  1. What
    What
    June 3, 2010 at 4:47 am | # | Reply

    Yarp, should be "hefty," though I find the wording a little clunky. Is she supposed to be mixing metaphors?

  2. Steph
    Steph
    June 3, 2010 at 7:14 am | # | Reply

    Quick editing note — “paying me a heafty penny” — “hefty” is misspelled. I only point it out because you asked me to. :)

    • Jason Brubaker
      Jason Brubaker
      June 19, 2010 at 5:38 am | # | Reply

      Thanks I just made the change and will be uploading it today!

  3. Me
    Me
    June 8, 2010 at 5:10 am | # | Reply

    Your drawings are lovely!

    Also, there ought to be a comma in "Why, Dad?"

    • Dan Hoey
      Dan Hoey
      June 21, 2010 at 7:39 pm | # | Reply

      If she’s asking her Dad, “Why, Dad?” then there should be a direct address comma there.

      But if she’s asking herself why her father is one of the ones that disappeared, then “Why Dad?” is correct.

  4. Dan Hoey
    Dan Hoey
    June 21, 2010 at 2:09 pm | # | Reply

    Gravestone is one word.

  5. hunchbook
    hunchbook
    August 3, 2010 at 11:37 am | # | Reply

    Why does the gravestone say 1904-20–? Was her father a hundred when he died? Wouldn't that make him 80 when she was born?

  6. Emma
    Emma
    October 24, 2010 at 6:59 am | # | Reply

    I think the phrase is "pretty penny," but that's usually for something costing you a "pretty penny."

    Anyway, those two highly important words aside, I love the drawings and am excited to keep reading

  7. David A. Nova
    David A. Nova
    November 30, 2010 at 10:55 pm | # | Reply

    Another nice page layout. The transition of shots are particularly nice because of how the character's pose helps to establish the mood. Very nice story telling here, it's rare to see effective use of a three pannel layout, especially in American comics where all the pages are so filled with information.

  8. Danny
    Danny
    January 1, 2012 at 7:54 pm | # | Reply

    I think it should be “If it weren’t for” instead of wasn’t; it’s subjunctive.

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